More! Please, more! Castiel is written very well.

wow.

Good job. Interesting and well written. I thought you did a really good job with the characters. Loved the Angel of Trenchcoats line :-)

Good job. Interesting and well written. I thought you did a really good job with the characters. Loved the Angel of Trenchcoats line :-)

He doesn't quite undetstand humans, but he is getting there.

Oh yes, that was very clever. I love the progression with Castiel being unable to recognize that though the Key is in human form she actually is human. It is only as she speaks that he can begin to see her humanity. It was brilliant. And Buffy saving the day is, of course, a requirement for any good Dawn-gets-kidnapped story!

Bahaha: once again, I just love Buffy's mistake at the end. Still funny. That conversation between Castiel and Dawn is so scarily in-character. I could really picture every moment of. Wonderful story!