Loved it, even if Puck did give up his immortality for her. It's a true love story. A bit sad that she came home in the middle of a war. But it was still a good story. And different. I love your stories, Curlscat.

cute!

LOVE THIS ONE!

wow that was really long but it was also kind of sweet how Sabrina tried so hard to get back to Puck and Puck gave up immortality for her

Astounding! It almost made me cry.

realism and fantasy coexisting to make this story, not everyone can pull that off but you made it work really well and the ending was fantastic.

Great writing no OOC crap going on although you did evolve their characters (which was done in good taste). I got a little lost in the middle but you brought me back into the story near the end so... YAY!

To start, I really like your stories. At first, I was thinking "Wow, the first line is that she likes him? Not my favorite way to start a story..." But you have proven me wrong! This was cute, but not overly fluffy and generally gross like other fics on here.

Maybe a little more detail? But, then again, that's only my opinion and this was overall a good story.

You make my work look like crap. -.-'

*sobs* THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! Totally IC. I don't know how to really describe it. It was just awesome! I love how Puck gave up his immortality for Sabrina-so. Fluffy.

Great job with the story! I'm glad Henry didn't blow up in Puck's face when he found out they were dating. :3

-Lara

Good stuff :)

Hahaha I'm singing this song in Chorus XD it was worth reading the story just for that. Anyway Nice job!

This may seem curt but really all I have to say is I like this. Scarborough fair is a great song (thanks for introducing it to me with this story) cool idea of this story but I wish it was longer with a little more detail. Overall I really liked it

Alcoholic Goldfish

Great! Love the end, it's not " and they lived happily ever after. " Awesome!

Great! Love the end, it's not " and they lived happily ever after. " Awesome!

Yay! Scarbourgh Fair! England! YAY! I've never been to Scarbourgh in England (even though I live in england lol) that song you used actually is about the fair in england! Thank you so much for using english things!

I love it when people do but not many do, so I get really excited when I see something belonging to England! Go England, and cornish pasties (Yum... Cornish pasties...)

Write more about England pretty please! I am telling you to write a story about the grimm gang going to england please!

GREAT STORY LUB IT!

TS

Wow. Yeah, Puckabrina FOR ONCE XD. I was reading the first few paragraphs and going, "This really doesn't seem like curlscat." But your voice became much more prominent throughout the course of the story, and by the end there was no doubt about who the writer was. It's a beautifully realistic story with a beautifully realistic song playing in the background. Almost like a songfic, but . . . classier. Like a poem-fic :)I especially like that this isn't really about Puckabrina. I mean, it is, but you twisted it in a way so that Puckabrina is a necessary plot element, but it's not the plot itself. If that makes any sense. And the ending, well, that was just perfection. I know if I were Sabrina, I would hate to be immortal. Puck's choosing mortality is, for me, the idealistic ending. And, as a reader, I liked that you didn't give them a boring happily ever after. I really like the thought of them getting into trouble and solving mysteries and being Grimms until the bitter end. The future is Grimm :)))))