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xSereneChaos 5/30/12 . chapter 224
C'mon Erica! Don't regress to your old ways! I hope you realize what's happening! AMAZING chapter! LOVED IT!
nuttyeyes2012 5/30/12 . chapter 223
PERFECT FLOW!

It was nice to see everyone enjoying themselves at Bianca and Marissa's new home. The two little girls are so so cute (Gabby and Ayesha). I love how Gabby was demanding her mom’s attention - "like serious mom what I'm creating here for YOU with my drawing masterpiece is way more important than Reggie scaring the boys and whatnot". I'm pretty sure that's what Gabby was thinking...lol

I seriously miss Greenlee every time I hear her name mentioned. :(

Marissa is the best thing that has ever happened to Bianca IMO! She is so attentive to Bianca's every need. She doesn't miss a beat when it comes to Bianca and making sure that she is comfortable and well taken care of even while trying to be a gracious host to their family and loves ones. And the same can be said for Bianca as well.

I am most impressed with Marissa because she hasn't fully gained all of her memory yet but effortlessly pour everything into making her relationship with Bianca work. I love how she has fallen in love with Bianca all over again. BEAUTIFUL!

NICE JOB ON UPDATE...FAB

Ps. let the drama begin once Erica makes her appearance.

:)
luci465 5/29/12 . chapter 223
No problem following the flow at all. Love the interaction of all of them. I love how you show the connection between Marissa and Bianca. Binx was feeling underdressed and Red just knew how she felt and brought her a cover up without being asked. I hope Kendall and Erica behave themselves for Bianca's sake. Great update!
CurlyAkemy 5/29/12 . chapter 223
The back and forth is what make family get togethers- family get togethers. No worries- great chapter! As always.
xSereneChaos 5/29/12 . chapter 223
Tensions are growing and i am LOVING the way you're writing Reggie! Simply amazing!
luci465 5/28/12 . chapter 222
Great mother/daughter moment between Bianca and Miranda. I also loved that Bianca isn't hiding anything from Marissa. You do a great job showing the depth of their committment. Great update!
xSereneChaos 5/28/12 . chapter 222
Aww Miranda! She's such an awesome kid! LOVE it!
nuttyeyes2012 5/28/12 . chapter 222
I always enjoy reading chapters with the children in them. Loved the mother and daughter moment (very tender)! I hope Bianca's health continues to improve...

GREAT UPDATE!

FAB

:)
nuttyeyes2012 5/28/12 . chapter 221
Timing is everything!

In Bianca's current condition maybe Kendall's interruption isn't so bad...I'm ONLY guessing though...:)

FAB

:)
nuttyeyes2012 5/28/12 . chapter 220
Thank goodness Cara and Tad are still friends! I loved the advice she gave him...:)

Nice Update...FAB

:)
evonda43gmail.com 5/28/12 . chapter 219
Very Nice Update!

There were so many beautiful moments shared between the two during their outing. I hate the fact that Bianca is in so much pain though. All the details and descriptions of what the girls were doing were AMAZING to read!

You definitely know how to paint a picture perfectly!

YOU BE FAB...

:)
luci465 5/27/12 . chapter 221
Kendall has the best/worst timing! LOL! Who can blame Bianca for not wanting to jinx anything! There does seem to be a pattern. I love Marissa doing her best to cheer up Binx. I think she's doing a pretty good job! Love the kids, and that was perfect how Ian was focused on something else! Great update!
xSereneChaos 5/27/12 . chapter 221
Bahahaha Kendall! Awesome chapter! The kids are awesome and i'm loving how this 'perfect day' is working out :)
RagnarWolf 5/27/12 . chapter 221
Nice update to the perfect day. Does Kendall have like Minx radar or something. LOL Loved all the kids...but where is Gabby that kid is always too cute. If anyone besides Marissa can cheer up Binx its got to be the girls. Looking forward to the next update.
xSereneChaos 5/26/12 . chapter 220
Awww tad! I love him - i hope he gets what he's looking for when he comes face to face with Dixie. As for Cara, she's kickass for helping him see all of this. Love their friendship and you portray it so well!
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