Great story! Loved it! Total "Aw" moment with Dagwood and his cat! I loved that! Good job!

hi,

I read this story over a year ago and was fascinated.

the link in the summary isn't working. that's sad. I hope to find more of the iri in your profile.

bye yury

oooohhhhhh this is sooo good! it's awesome! i LOVE it! please write more more more...pah-lease?

sorry...forgot to mention this in my last review...Yea Tim! I think sometimes he is severely overlooked.. don't forget about Tim!

Please, Please write more soon! That's all I can say.. the first part is great, I'm dying waiting for more!

So they acceppted. What happens now?

Great story. Wow, it's absolutely excellent. I loved the..prologue or epilogue..um..the beginning bit - it was really well written. :)

This is really good so far, I can't wait to find out what happens. Write more soon!

Wow! Tjis si great. Is it going to be Lucas centric or is it going to focus on everyone equally? Who cares? You must write more. Pleeeaasssseee (imagine begging and sobbing, ripping of hair).

I love where you're going with this. You could even stretch it into a series. Please put up another chapter. The suspense is killing me and i only finished chapter 2 four minutes ago. How am i going to sleep tonight? The humanity!