PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY BUT WHO IS RINITY GOING TO END UP WITH. PLEASE WOULD YOU MAKE SOME MORE STORYS HOW ABOUT WHEN SHE END UP WITH GOKU/GOHAN THE SON

hey good job on this chappie!!!! email me when more comes out!!! hardly wait!!! cute_duckie44@hotmail.com

I like the way you are moving the story along. Don't worry too much describing the scenes everyone knows the basic Dragonball story pretty well and so not writing those descriptive settings is fine with me.
Most authors write the crossovers set in DBZ but I'm glad to see your x-over idea.
I can't wait to read more. One suggestion, can you please bring Bardock back. Like, instead of Oolong saying he wants the most comfortable underwear in the world, Serenity could beat him by wishing for Bardock to return. Anyway, whatever you do I'll enjoy it. So, more, please.

OMG!!!! I LLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE this story. It's great!!

this is good! i hope you update soon, i can't wait to see how some of goku's later adventures go! please update soon!

Hey, this fic's really good! However, i started to read it with the impression that it was usagi/goku, but... anyway... i'll wait for the next chapters! good job on it, too.

uh, you misspelled 'sea'. ["see"]
heheh, happens to everyone.

i like your story its good

Interesting twist on the original Dragonball tale. Coolness. One other thing, I think someone already might have said this but oh well, Goku actually means "Sky" in japanese. But, criticism aside, this story is great. please update soon

I'm still liking it. I just have one thing to nag about. When you're typing dialogue and using the quotes, you put the comma outside the quotes. It's supposed to be inside the quotes. But that's just my grammar-freak-ish nature popping out again. The story's still great, and overall, spelling and grammar are great. Keep it up!

cool

Wahoo! We finally meet Bulma! Yeah!!! Good Job!

Your story rocks and I was thrilled to see the outers again. Keep up the awesome work and update soon! ^_^

this was a great chapter!! please update as soon as u can!! is master roshi next? hehehhe let's how he'll end up when he tries to hit on Sere... hehehehehe... please update as soon as u can!! umm.. i was also wondering... who is Serenity going to be paired up with? is she even going to be paired up with anyone?

lol. This is so kawaii! Arigatou for updating. ^.^ lol. Can't wait for more!! onega, keep up the good work!

This is very interesting, but I didn't expect Serenity to go along with them. It kinda defeats the purpose of Goku going. I'm not for sure on this, but doesn't Goku train and get stronger in his travels with Bulma? How will that happen if Sere is there to fight for him?