nice

I have enjoyed this series. Thank you.

I found the ending a little abrupt, but I guess that's just incentive to go and see if you've written a follow-up to this story.

I really like Sophia. Albus' grandson was much like Albus - not a whole lot of help for Snape in the end, just there to get him on track for future use. I've higher hopes for Millner, though. Oh, and I like your use of the snake animagus, especially the bit where Sev got a little overwhelmed and hid under the chair - very snake-like!

Seems kind of abrupt to suddenly move forward 5 years. But I still will keep reading. I do so want to know what happens next.

really enjoyed.

Please write more Coachwhip stories.

PS: Good stories get ignored, randomly bad Mary Sues get glory.

Why?

Scorpio Grudge, Yes I'm greedy! Please keep writing. Yours are truly good stories - all o f them! I swung from anger to tears to laughter and back again. Combine this with proper spelling, grammar and punctuation and I'm in heaven. *Please* keep writing! Gilda

let me guess hermione?

pls let it be her

This is intriguing! I had to read it all...couldn't stop! More soon please? I'm betting he has to babysit Potter!

I loved this chapter. It was great and I'm coming to really enjoy this grand mother of Severus. Her reactions to the whole situation were very credible.

Very well done

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Aliera

Hello.

Right. He as a huge grudge against Harry and all. But wasn't it too rash for severus to just tell the brat he is a spy?

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Hello!

I am liking this very much, and hope you'll keep updating. Is Harry going to be in this story, or any other of the canon charecters? Not that I mind, either way. Your Snape is very well done, and I especially like his interaction with Dumbledore- hope more of this comes to life.

Hello!

Sorry I didn't review earlyer but ff didn't let me.

Wise crack Lorenz ;D

I didn't read all chapters in the coachwhip yet, but can't recall, Snape having an owl there.

What hapened? Will something hapen to it?

I'm liking the cold treatment, Snape is giving Dumbledore. For anyone who read Rowlings Books, it's clear he is not so kindly treated by the headmaster. Just used.

Hope you'll write more soon.

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Aliera

Hello!

Great chapter.

I'm liking this so much!

I Took pity on Severus. Imagine, having only your instincts controling you.

Loved the learning and the results. And Severus crawling under the dresser...

I'll keep reading. Please write more soon.

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Aliera

Oh, very interesting! Please continue; I can't wait to see what happens next!