 Makokam 9/26/11 . chapter 1Fun sto- ... -facepalm- i just got the title. Very nice work there.
Anyway, this was a good story, but not all that great. It just seemed to lack something... some sort of payoff I guess... like it was cut out of a larger story.
It was still fun and an enjoyable story, it just made me wish there was more to it. But that's a compliment in an of itself isn't it?
Makokam out. |