|Reviews for The Slap of Mortality|
| Konoko89 5/6/07 . chapter 4
That was so sweet and beautiful. I love Aragorn's joyous reaction to Legolas' confession. That was quite amusing. Another wonderful job!
| darksaphire 12/20/05 . chapter 4
aw...i want a sequal to this. this was sad yet so sweet. bittersweet ne? lol. anyhow. i wanna see a sequal done!
| not the usual baka 6/18/05 . chapter 4
Is it just me or does this story have a humourous side to it? It's so sweet! Lots of interesting inner turmoil sections in the story and the twins' reaction to Legolas' glare was good.
| Mariella 9/17/04 . chapter 4
This is such a wonderful story. You managed to give the characters life and depth and you're really a gifted writer.
| shs 3/7/04 . chapter 2
good comments: good, dramatic, nice
bad comments: lessen the head battle with legolas; it's getting annoying
sorry if i up setted u
bye bye !
| Destiny Lot 12/27/03 . chapter 4
Wonderful, thoughtful and enjoyable.
| Guest 2/15/03 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Nice paced writing and lovely characterization. More, please!
| x 1/22/03 . chapter 4
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!LOVED IT!
| keebler elf1 9/26/02 . chapter 4
aww i luv it!
it's so cute
yur such a good writer!
| Moonchild 7/17/02 . chapter 4
This is amazing. From "Things Unspoken" to this piece, your writings will always remain my favourite. Go you! _
| icefalcon 7/16/02 . chapter 4
I highly enjoyed this fic... very bittersweet. I also thought that the language was extremely fitting (in most parts) and actually evoked a Tolkienish feel, as opposed to some smut A/L. (Not that there's anything wrong with smut!)
Is there going to be more? :)
| annakas 6/15/02 . chapter 4
this was incredible fic! is it THE END? *sob* It was an exellent story!
| Y 6/10/02 . chapter 4
/me put my hands over my mouth immediately to stiffened da scream... (i'm school)
Goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! as fantastic as always _
| di 6/10/02 . chapter 4
ohh soo sweet! very cool! i loved it! especially aragorn, he was real cool! gimme more more more!
| Nemesi 6/10/02 . chapter 4
Awww... *-* This DEFINITELY was one of the best A/L fics I've ever read. *is in bliss* So sweet... so cute... *is at a loss of words* what about a sequel? *hopeful Hobbit eyes* I loved this, but I know I would love even more an eventual sequel... *thumb up* Anyway, that was magnificent! Bravo!