This is amazing, it should have been longer though, keep up the good work!:)3

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! great job! i HATE Nash, for what happened, but now i kinda see how it felt through his eyes. i still dont like him but... i LOVE this. :P

I love your writing style! It's so clear and discriptive. Honestly I don't really like Nash, but I think you described his feelings really well.

You should write more Soul Screamers fanfictions! xD