|Reviews for A Fighting Chance|
| salamangkero 5/25/13 . chapter 11
a pity the story had to end this way. nevertheless, it was a very good story. thank you for sharing.
| Lord of Misrule 5/17/13 . chapter 1
Vorlons did it ;)
The Vorlons need to protect their timeline, they need Babylon 4 and Valen to go back to the previous Shadow War but for B4 to be constructed Earth has to fight the Minbari alone and get trashed. Preventing Drazi assistance by any means possible was necessary for the plan. If the Drazi became involved the res tof the League could follow and that could seriously alter the timeline. No B4, no Valen, and the Vorlons who place order and structure above all else wind up with chaos on their hands.
Not good for them :p
| Lyoko4everandever 5/16/13 . chapter 10
who wasted the drazi fleet? the Drakh
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 11
I am sorry that you won't finish this, but I do appreciate all that you have written. Such a wonderful story. I wish I had found it earlier.
It's funny that it has so few reviews. It's so well written that it honestly reads like the best military SF fiction available at the local bookstore. Yet less than a hundred reviews. I guess its the genre.
Thanks for taking the time to give us a glimpse into your imagination. Peace out.
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 10
Damn what a great chapter. I can see so many different things happening here. Things that will lead to grave consequences at some point in the story. Wonderful subtlety.
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 9
Another great chapter. What a fantastic story. I really am enjoying the insights into the different alien races and their cultures.
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 8
That was wonderful. Great battle. Great descriptions. Great action. Love this story!
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 7
Such a great build up to another epic battle!
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 6
Poor Drazi. Ran into the Shadows, did they?
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 5
Sweet! Really enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait to see the EAF strike back.
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 4
Horrifying, but the sheer gutsyness of the humans stands out.
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 3
Okay, that was pathetic. Surely they would use massed waves of nuclear missiles to provide blinding EMP coverage. Horrible, but great descriptions of the massacre.
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 2
That was fascinating, the viewpoint of the Dilgar, especially the Warmaster. Great chapter!
| becuzitswrong 4/21/13 . chapter 1
That is one hell of a first chapter. This seems like it's going to be a good story. I'll be reading on.
I still want to tackle your opus, The Dilgar War. The million plus words make it a bit intimidating as I do not have a lot of spare time to read, unfortunately. But I have been wanting to start it so very much. Maybe when I finish this...
| Xerxez 1/5/13 . chapter 11
Sad to see that the story won't be completed, though thankfull that you posted a summary of plot-points.