Ah, another great story you have hear, Mr. Fetter. Savior is quite the interesting x-over series, and I love what you've written so far. When I first saw that you intended to incorporate DBZ into the fic, I was a bit hesitate to read Savior, fearing that it would be another senseless fight fic. I was, however, pleasantly surprised, upon reading the story, to find that humor, dialogue, and an array of details and emotions were the main driving points of the story (and not paragraphs upon paragraphs of fighting, fighting, fighting). The various characters are developing quite nicely, and I cannot wait for the next installment to be released. Could this be another Schools United? One can only hope. Keep on writing, and remember, squirrels are people too... bah, more coffee...
Interesting mass-crossover, I'm very glad to see you're still working on it.
I'm enjoying the developments between Ranma & Akane, and am interested to see what/who else will turn up. What of Herb or Happosai, Ukyou or Pantyhose Tarou? Will Miss Hinako make an appearence, and will Kuno arrive in pursuit of Akane, proclaim his love for his pig-tailed goddess and be reduced to ashes?
Minor Quibble: In the introductions scene you referred to R&A as heirs to the Anything-Goes School, and Ryoga as being a practioner of the Indiscriminant Grappling School. Both names are common translations of R&A's form of martial arts, while Ryoga's school has never been named. Intentional/unintentional?
By the way, are you still writing 'A Bengal Tale 2'?
Great story man. Don't know what you mean by Dragonball Z not being more than just fighting though... what about those 10 episodes before each fight where they stand around talking to each other about nothing as they power up...? ;P Anyway, keep writing, hope to read more soon.
I'd nearly forgotten about this story, It's good to see it continued and this is an excelent chapter _ Keep up the good work and I want to see lots more of this!
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