Reviews for The Juuban Incident

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irgendwas 2008-06-03 ch 11,	abusewhile the story itself was good the end was just horrible. seriously i know all about this 'a true hero always dies' crap but killing ranma - and even more so because of the way you did it - was simply unnecessary. i liked the story, it was fun to read, but the end with all of this forced drama was just stupid - sorry i guess from an artistic viewpoint it is perfectly ok but you built up nice characters and a nice story only to shatter everything in the last chapter - in my huble opinion thats not something you do to your readers. regards
mikebreslau 2008-03-23 ch 11,	abuseOh wow. Thi was very moving. A unique story wih a unique end. thanks for writing. Mike
mikebreslau 2008-03-21 ch 7,	abuseGood story, original idea, nice pacing. My only problem with this chapter is that you interleaved dialog from simultaneous but separate scenes together. A master craftsman could pull this off, but you left me confused and baffled. Slowing down the reader by making him decode the story is not a good idea. regards and thanks, Mike
Ambiguous Inexplicable Enig... 2007-04-09 ch 11,	abuseSigh... Another classic. - Added to my Favorite Stories list.
ryokocsi 2006-10-25 ch 11,	abuseI enjoyed the story.. till the end. At the end, Ranma was brutally murdered, almost as an aside, but for this to be a sacrifice, there has to be an element of choice. You don't do that to the protagonist, it feels like weak storytelling. I also didn't like the morality of how it came across... it's okay to brutally murder people because you'd lose else, as long as someone else does it IS the moral of the story as written Pity, because I've loved all the rest of this.
I am the Bane of my Sword 2006-08-08 ch 6,	abuseThe Queen! Whoaz!!
Tuisto 2006-07-29 ch 11,	abuseEven for a Ranma fic crossed with SailorMoon, this is a very good fanfiction. A very interesting and well defined creative plot are formed nicely with a good fluid writing style. Though, despite all the well described actions scenes and more lighthearted moments, if I had to describe this fic in one word, I'd call it: sad. Good, but with a tragic ending; but still with a little bit of good nature in the final paragraph. AA++
Zero of the Black Knights 2006-04-24 ch 1,	abuseWell this story was all right. Sorry but the ending sucked. Sucked like , horrible smelling . you ruined it whyd you kill Ranma dumb **. no one and i mean no one wants to see Ranma die,
Blackdex 2006-01-30 ch 11,	abuseIm not realy a sailor moon fan, i realy like ranma though, however, i was running out of long ranma fanfics, so i begain using the search tool with keyword "Ranma" in other catagorys, and what should i find but one of the better ranma x - over fanfics, i may just have to read some dedicated sailor moon now. Exelent work, you have my respect
ecchansama 2005-11-02 ch 10,	abuseoh, and for gods' sake. use the japanese spelling. rei looks so much better than rae/ray/raye
ecchansama 2005-11-02 ch 11,	abuseit started off with a real fix-all feeling. too much bad often resolves in a fix-all end. i loved the end. i hope you don't mind if i steal an idea or two? anyway, the storyline is good but not perfect. as stated earlier, i would argue with your presentation of the outers. "power corrupts" could explain parts of their behaviour, but not all of it. =/ what i don't like is a passage in the epilogue. neither of them would ever forget. never. as for characters. they are fairly close to 3-dimensional. there is a little something lacking. they jump but don't manage to fly.
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk... 2005-08-18 ch 11,	abuseGreat story, it was pretty sad what happened to Ranma though :(.
CrossoversKittyKat 2005-07-03 ch 1,	abusewhoa intence
dogbertcarroll 2004-02-17 ch 11,	abuseExcellent ending. Ranma apparently still didn't get to be male in the end tho'. Kinda sucks. Great anyway. Loved the bit with why Pluto was called Pu'.
dogbertcarroll 2004-02-17 ch 10,	abuseGreat ending. It was perfect.

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