| Reviews for The New League |
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Master of the Boot 11/24/11 . chapter 2Well it's great so far, I'm loving the action and the work but I think you may need a few pointers. First of all, don't hesitate to take your time. A few extra paragraphs of explanation go very far. So take your time and try to describe things. Number two, try to put a message on the top where you explain where these characters are from. As I'm not familiar with Mugshot and Blackheart. The fight scene are superb, so no problems there. And I'd love to see this continue ;) Ta Master of the Boot |
Master of the Boot 11/24/11 . chapter 1Man, I have to admit that I'm really excited for this :) I can't wait to see how this all blends together :D Plus I love Snake Plissken So thrilling! Ta Master of the Boot |