This sounds REALLY good already, I'm getting excited. (my sad life :c)

Only criticism I have is that you need to at least write 'Lily thought' or 'James thought' when writing down their thoughts. It gets pretty confusing... or put the thoughts in italics? (idk)

I fucking love this! I wish JKRowling had something as cool as this in the books! Please please was write a sequel or epilogue! Thank you for writing this! This is by far one of the most creative Fanfictions I have ever read! :D

Its already been nearly 4 years
the epilogue please

Yes i think you should wite an epiloge even a short one or ideally extend that last part and make a bit more love between James and lily pleeze ! :) l love this story but would have ratherd something more between them.. :)

I cant believe people dont like the story anymore its great i'm marvelling at how cool an imagineation u have ! Ur making up Ur own stuff its so original (for fanfiction ) ;) i love the story and can almost imagine it as a movie ! But would like to see more James and lily and i dont see where the amazing love James has for lily is !? I think he needs to talk more about how much he loves her but thats just my opinion ... Great story ! :)

Wow this story was amazing! It actually made me cry when she died! I wasnt sure if id like it at the start but i just carried on reading and im so glad i did! U r an amazing writer! Keep writin!

Okay, it's a good plot, but the story is droning on and on now. Also, the author's notes throughout the chapters are really bothering me. Put them all at the end because I just want to read the story without interruptions.

It already past 4 years. So Epilogue.

I was like "God! Lily isn't going to come to life again! Why the life is so unfair? Poor James *laughing, crying and being depressed*" This story is totally awesome I know I have repeat this word a lot of times but What can I say? That was just so fucking Amazing? Freking fantastic? It was like that every single detail even for you ex- Fourteen years old.

I have read this story in 3 days until now. I want to congratulate you even if you finished this story around 5 years ago. It was one of the best I have read in a time., now you're 25 or 26, no? And you started this like 11 years ago? This is having a great and powerful mind.

Regards,

Diane Potter.

this is awsome!

That-That-That was... *starts to cry* s-s-so s-sweet and sad! Good job with the story! Adios! :}

Peace,Love,and Treacle Tart!

Heya, I started reading this the other day and only just finished it, I really liked it, though I did get abit confused in places but I just kept going :)

You probably don't go on here anymore but it would be ace if you did do an epilogue

I'm definitely gonna take a look at some of your other stories, though it was because of a L/J christmas story I found you- which was also ace! And if I'm correct your birthday soon... Happy birthday for then if it is :) if its not I just seem strange now lol

:) so anyway great work, your 14 year old self should be proud lol

Great story, but I gotta say this- Did you read Harry Potter? Becaus if you did, I think you would know it's the Imperius curse, not imperial. Just letting you know. Love this story!

Star*

This is quite possibly the most complicated story I've ever read. I mean there was so much going on! It must've taken you forever to come up with all of your insane ideas. I loved it!

ALowe

Please, please, please do an epilogue. This has to be one fo the best stories I have ever written. Please write an epilogue, I want to know what else happened...

Seriously(or Siriusly) I have loved reading this. Thanks for writing it, it was amazing. I loved the idea of the hat telling her it would have been easier for her in Gryffindor, and also the idea of her soul being put back together to bring her back to life...anyway, please continue it, even if just for a small epilogue?

Please do an epiloge i love this story so much and think that your an amazing writer.