| Reviews for that breath you take |
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floating on clouds above 2/17/13 . chapter 1Sweet! :) |
els1324 1/31/12 . chapter 1This was really good! I don't think anyone has made Sakura noticeable through smell over the color of her hair, nice touch! :) You should think about making a sequel to this, I'd love to see where it goes. |
wingedmercury 1/30/12 . chapter 1This one was really yummy:) |
Sophisticate Aristocrat 11/13/11 . chapter 1This would be such an awesome meeting, seriously. I almost laughed out loud when Sakura simply leaves by giving him the finger. Too good. XD And I love fics where they meet in greasy nightclubs/bars coincidently. I don't know why. |
meantimegirl 10/22/11 . chapter 1spur of the moment sasuke retrival missions. epic. i feel the tension in every sentence. love this |
moor 10/16/11 . chapter 1Oh it wasn't the red dress that got his attention, it was her perfume... Yes, that's Sasuke. Ignore the obvious. XD |
HappyDeathFairy 10/10/11 . chapter 1I really liked it a lot. :D |
FlowersN'stars 10/8/11 . chapter 1I like this Sasuke xD will there be more? :D |
wanderluft 9/30/11 . chapter 1Beautiful. Simply, beautiful. |
Guest 9/28/11 . chapter 1 My friends told me I am hopelessly dense, but Sasu-chan seems to be flirting with Saku-chan to me. |
sky's traffic 9/27/11 . chapter 1"-vaguely hopes that she will never change her perfume." Oh, Sasuke. You should just marry her and you can smell her for as long as you like :D Back to the topic: Another well-written fic! ;) Well done :D |
SparrowEyes 9/27/11 . chapter 1continue thisss! i love itt. squeal pleaseeeeeee |
therentyoupay 9/26/11 . chapter 1I love the concept of this LJ community! You're right, it was definitely a little OOC, but still easy to appreciate. :) |
Kaze and Kiba 9/26/11 . chapter 1Woah, ooc Sasuke? When he's that hot, who cares? lol. Nah, when he's not dealing with his family issues why shouldnt he be a little more fun? Awesome. This would be fun as a series of little snapshots where they meet in passing and he kinds of stalks her, like flirtingly-yeah, that's probably not a real word, eheh. Thanks, K&K |
The Scarlett Ribbon 9/26/11 . chapter 1OMGLOVEIT. YOU ARE ON A ROLL AT THE MOMENT, GENERAL! Call Sasuke OOC here, but somehow you still make him believable. And sexy. I love the way he teases Sakura here; there is something very...light about him. It's almost affectionate, or as affectionate as Sasuke ever gets. I'M GOING TO FLAIL SOME MORE NOW. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY. No, really. I kind of wish there was more of this... :) |