I NEED MOAR ! MY HUNGER FOR THIS STORY IS NOT SATISFIED !

Dammit -_- I thought it was really happening.. I was raging so hard

very good story, and i love how naruto turns out. are you gonna make mei pregnant just to add to his problems?

On the cover art, Naruto seems to be wearing a Kirigakure headband... *GASP!* Is this foreshadowing I smell?

I cant wait to see what you have for us in the next chapter. So far this has probably been the most captivating Naruto fanfic out there.

You should remove this before you kill someone, my heart nearly stopped.

Naruto is still too weak, especially if you take into account his age and the fact that he is such genius. In the beginning you portrayed him and Itachi equals, yet at this age Itachi was said to be much stronger than Kisame.

This fanfic is amazing, I'm really glad you have not canceled, when you decided to continue it, I was glad far is the best Naruto fanfic I've read, this is one of the few fanfic that I never tire of reading (plus is fanfci my favorite).
I would like to see a scene of naruto and sakura lemon (the reason I say this is because sakura feels an attraction for his master, either for her to kick her system, if you do not want this couple, and leave it as something platonic) or simply that they have a night , after that naruto return to Kiri (with Mei) and Remain three years there, and then he can return to Konoha (shippuden saga for) and they continue their relationship (with Sakura)
All this is just an opinion, continuing the fic it your way, I really like how you write, just never stop writing and update it soon!

You completely fooled me last chapter :p. I had already accepted that i had to start watching My Little Pony in order to understand the fic from that point on. Nice chapter btw. Naruto joining Akatsuki in a way similar to Itachi seems like a good idea to me, would be nice to read. :)

Why didn't he simply use lightning.

Just started reading this and chapters ten and eleven are so far my favorite. I hate Anko had to die but her death means so much to the progression of the story and naruto's character. When someone writes something that the reader can feel and relate to, that they can sympathize, well... it ain't easy and takes talent.

Anko's death brings a realism to the story, it transcends that this is fiction and makes it real. The message is clear, for every life a death is owed, and no one is exempt from that fact.

A long-procrastinated review:

A splendid chapter! Concerning the scroll of seals given to Naruto by Kushina. After Naruto described almost feeling a bond between the seal master, an intellectual peer. I couldn't help but wonder if an earlier thought of mine was true. Had Kushina written the scroll? It's been shown earlier that she wasn't just an average kunoichi who retired. I guess I'll find out when Naruto lets her know of his appreciation.

Naruto and Minato's talk had certainly been interesting. Revealing some details that will heavily shape the story from this point on. It also shows that Jiraiya can't keep secrets. I admit, I had been expecting a more humorous reveal of Naruto's relationship. I'd say this is an improvement.

I can't wait to see both Naruto and Sakura back in Konoha. Naruto, after having been in a village that had no negative preconceptions about him. And Sakura, having gone through severe changes. How will her friends and family see her?

When I consider how long it takes me to write a review, I find myself amazed that anyone ever updates a story.

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Well, thank you sir for this chapter. It's not like I wanted to feel any happiness in my life...

God...that scene with Kimiko and Naruto...KYAAAAAAA! THE SUGARY SWEETNESS IS GUSHING OUT OF MY EYES! AHHHHH!

All seriousness though, that scene was just...amazing. Brother 'n' Sister bonding, *sniff sniff*. My god. I applaud you, sir/madame. (Not sure of your gender)

Side note: Fem!NarutoxSasuke? Really? *Head tilts* Really? *Sigh* Oh well, here goes dissu shitto agann.

Side side note: Mei? Shouldn't she be trying to collect all of the badges?