Keep going! its pretty good! omg i hate minnerva now lol i like ur story

stefan is such an arse hole

last line was so trew poor Persephone nd I hope Callie will be alright

if only Callum nd Persephone could have been together...brilliantly written well done

So sad :( Lukin forward 2 readin the next bk

*Sigh* you crushed our dreams of Callum and Sephy being together.

You could totally write a sequel to this and make about Callie Rose trying to fight Stephan in secert and make her meet Tobey through some very very secert (practically non esxist) rebillion. Or you could use her to start her own rebillion by making her fall in love with Tobey and kill him off or Tobey and his family could work for Sephy's and that could be how they meet. well that's all the ideas I can come up with.

Chaio!

Zarsla

That last line was amazing. Brilliant story. I loved it. You should write more for N&C

Dear. God. You actually killed Callum : : : That was... unexpected to say thr least. Bloody hell : Briliant chapter

Stefan's a *insert bad words here*. loving Callum though obvs :D

Oh my god, I really thought it was going to be a happy ending :'( This is such amazing writing though and I've loved your story from the very first chapter!

Well done xoxoxo

I love this because you're keeping with the book in a lot that happens but with your own twist, like Stefan and all that. It works so well.

Brilliant chapter. I love the way it progressed to that ending 3

Oh wow :O I was not expecting that :O :O

The last couple of lines of this chapter were heartbreaking D:

Aw poor Sephy :(