U really ned to update I wanna know what's gonna happen! I always check if u update but u don't it make me wanna cry! WAH! J/K. But really update please!

::Gives Son Grin:: -BlackTigerG2

Nee! Whats going on? I leave this site 4 months ago and your still not finish? Either you got a MAJOR witters block or MAJOR laziness! UPDATE ALREADY! I wanna see if goten- ur- Taio (sp?) will kill gohan, turn him in or go back to normal!

awesome update soon

Interesting. You've finally updated.. O_o

was there some reason for all the random suffixes? it was... odd...

you did good job on this dosnt goten give gohan a chance to explain instead of trying to kill him and why does goten asume gohan abandind did goten belive however told him these lies and why.

nretin so gt know that trunks is undr that outfit and i wonder whene gohan will fight goten and if he can get him to listin to a shame you dont have more revews.

i wonder how goten got so mmesed up that he hates gohan is ow gotel goa tat the stranger is his brother or will gohan discover that for himself.

i wonder how this alternit reality will turn out how does goten fit into ths and whene will gohan and goten meat up with each outher.

i wonder whene goohan will find out that goten is his brother and if he can cinvince goten that he was not abandoned.

he could tell from gohans stance i bet that he woulkd lose and gohan would win.i wonder whats going to happen next.

how sad goten has bean kidnaped.i wonder how the bings hoo kidnaped goten will start to turn him aginst his brother.

hiyaz, omg this is such a great story, i love it..

juz a word of advice tho..im not so shure if you should use so much japanese...i myself have been studying it for the last year [well not a full one yet and i still suck P lol] so i was able to understand everything you were saying cuz those were basically the first things i learned in jap but then i knoe that there are lotza people who will not understand the words you write..cuz before i learned it i dident even knoe what "nani" means lol [sorriez i couldn't think of any easier word P] but then yah..so iunno..juz thot i should let you knoe that to lotza people it will be confusing

lol, but this is still an excellent story, its one of my favs so far..lol...how old is taiyo? shouldent goten onlee be like 7 years old? lol okaay, well plz update soon, ja.

Love

Trunks' Brat Baby

Thank you so much for updating! It seems like it's been forever! Now go update 'Still Here'. Please.*makes 'Goten's Can I Please Have The Last Cookie Face'* I like all the japanese it's it up! 8.5 out of 10 )

wow! this story absolutely is amazing! I enjoy it soo much and this is awesome to read becoz its got alot of mystery going on. woohoo! go you! up-date soon!