*cries* poor Bean!

actually, i thought the characterization was really good. you got bean's dialogue down pat.

Best Enders Game fic I have read yet. I found it so sad the way Ender cut Bean off here, but Ender is quite cold on the outside. I liked how we didn't really, REALLY get into enders head in this, it was more about Bean. It was sweet, bittersweet. Great job. Very touching.

I think this story was very well written and I don't think you 'shot to hell' the characterization. A bit off but there were some good points where you were spot on to their personalities. I couldn't help but smile as I read and didn't notice I was crying until the end. Good job. 83

This is SOOOO lovely! :') x

i never would have pictured Bean and Ender having a witty little almost border-line homosexual relationship but other then the semi-gay stuff it was pretty well written

I loved this! Great title.

This was sad, bittersweet, and touching, and I enjoyed it a lot. I think you handled the characterizations pretty well. Ender seemed very resigned and somewhat world weary and Bean is still cocky and believes he knows best for everyone. Nice job!

HAHAH yes, i did notice that the characterization was really off as the story went along, but very good writing! You did a good job, and this was a really cool idea (: i especially love the last part, where Bean felt like crying. That was really good :] and YESSS PETER IS FREAKING AWESOME haha. I enjoyed reading this! :) thanks! keep writing, ure pretty good at dialogue lol