   Bkwrmchar 2/11/12 . chapter 16WOW! Great story. PLEASE Finish. |
| rookie802 11/14/11 . chapter 16 Great story. Cannot wait to read the sequel. |
| DeeksBlyeFan 10/18/11 . chapter 16 sweet as keep this up! |
| ladybugsmomma 10/18/11 . chapter 16 Grrrr, I hate cliffhangers! I can't wait to read more! |
| CamilaSVUCD 10/18/11 . chapter 16 how can u do this? I can't wait to the sequel. |
| liviscool 10/18/11 . chapter 16 Omgosh! Talk about cliffhanger! More soon please :) |
| Ren Victoria 10/18/11 . chapter 16 Omg Calvin! Damn u Zapata! |
| The Sarcastic Polar Bear 10/18/11 . chapter 16 Uh oh.. |
| Tiger.Lily.Weasley.757 10/18/11 . chapter 16 Bwahaha! What a cliff hanger! I cannot waaaiiitttt for the sequel! |
| Ren Victoria 10/18/11 . chapter 15 Aw Liv and Alex are like giddy school girls lol |
| The Sarcastic Polar Bear 10/17/11 . chapter 15 While I'm not an AO freak, keep going |
| liviscool 10/17/11 . chapter 15 Can't wait for more! |
| ladybugsmomma 10/17/11 . chapter 15 I would hope they were all dead. I'm glad Calvin is accepting Alex. I can't wait to read more! |
| Tiger.Lily.Weasley.757 10/17/11 . chapter 15 Ohhh no no no. If any of Zapata's men are still alive, I will personally hunt them down and kill them myself before they touch this family. Haha ;-) Great chapter as always! |
| CamilaSVUCD 10/17/11 . chapter 14 Loved, but I'm suspicious to say, since I fell in love with this story since the first chapter. |
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