Wow! I love your story. You really manage to keep the tension and storyline going at a good pace, not too hectic not too slow. :)

Amazing story. Thanks for sharing each moment of it.

Ok, so now we know for sure Edward has come back, but all these other little mysteries are popping up. I really like how you change up the sm vampire universe here (the venom, compulsion). It's keeping me guessing:)

This story is so intriguing! I love the mystery intermixed with flashbacks, makes for a very dynamic and interesting read!

I love your writing. Only an idiot would not love this story.

OMG wow, this was also another amazing story. I have yet to read one that I have not thoroughly enjoyed. I really liked this version of AU and how Edward was human first. Great job!

Ok, so I reviewed (on this particular chapter) a few days days ago, but from my phone and it kicked me off so I ended up all anonymous and whatnot. Not that I want to take credit or anything, just thought you oughta know I broke for you, ignored writing TOW for two whole days . . . .

Damn girl, you've got something *super* special. I am in utter fucking awe.

You did a really good job with this story. I enjoyed reading it a lot. My favorite part was when Edward brought Bella back to his home for the first time. The part with the Volturi was scary and I am trying to think that everything will work out okay in the end. So don't write a part two or something because I like living in my happily ever after world. ;-)

Thanks so much for writing and posting!

Yep, it was amazing. Just as I suspected. Gold stars all over this one.

Well, haven't read someone else's fic in a long ass time but made an exception for you and now here I am, on vacation, ignoring my husband, sucked right in because of your skillllllzzz.

Like this:
"We are careful to avoid too much speculation about our future, gorging ourselves instead on the sharp sweetness of right now."

Devestatingly beautiful. You're killing me smalls.

Nicely done. Lovely chapter

I can see bits of Starry Eyed here. Lovely

I am very curious now

LOVE IT ! So romantic and lovely.

Hey Ro, well I kind of cheated here and read most of this story on the fly so I wasn't able to leave reviews, but just wanted to let you know that I loved this story and your attempts to write AU! I bet its harder to write this type of thing and I admire you for giving it a shot! I haven't read many vamp fics lately and this was nice because it was already completed before I started. Looking forward to many more things from you in 2013! Hope you had a great Christmas and wishing you a very happy and healthy new year!

XO,
Lori