Oh my Merlin, Lovisa! I don't think I can't possibly thank you enough! This is such a beautiful poem and - asdfghjkl - WOW!

:')

The pairing is obviously one of my favorites and I just completely adore how you write them! You showed how close of a bond they had and how well they knew each other perfectly. Nothing about them was forced and they just seemed like they were meant to be! I lovelovelove your characterization of Remus! He is so sweet and nervous, but also not a prude like a lot of people make him out to be in fics. His chemistry with Sirius was just amazingly perfect. Ugh, I keep using the word perfect, but I just can't think of a better word to use because, well, this IS perfect!

:)

I also really adored how this poem was like a story (with dialogue and everything), but still had the flow and feel of a poem. The flow was steady and beautiful, as was the wording.

I was going to pick my favorite part to tell you, but I just pick one! I loved all the stanzas so much!

:')

Thanks again! I really really appreciate this! It's such a beautiful piece. Sorry it took me so long to review it, though.

-Morghen

that was so freaking cuteee!

i adore Remmius, and this was just so sweet and just ugh.

:D

keep rocking?

:)

always,

summer

Oh wow. Gah, I do love me some freeverse, but you really have a way with words. I've been veering away from RemusSirius, but you've got me hook, line and sinker.

I adore how Remus is a 'prude' and the sad puppy act from Sirius. It's so cute!

Wonderful writing!

Gah! This is amazing!

First off, I absolutely adore freeverse, and you did a fantastic job with the style!

Second, this pairing is just amazing (and yes, that needed to be said).

Great job!

One grammar thing:

"wasn't you the

prude

of you all?"

should be "WEREN'T you the prude".

Other than that, great!

This is my favorite part:

" you were happy you had

woken up

before him

just so you had

tim at him

tracing his

collarbone with your finger"

:D

(*_*)

aw. beautiful. great writing.