|Reviews for History Unfolds|
| Morghen 10/28/11 . chapter 1
Oh my Merlin, Lovisa! I don't think I can't possibly thank you enough! This is such a beautiful poem and - asdfghjkl - WOW!
The pairing is obviously one of my favorites and I just completely adore how you write them! You showed how close of a bond they had and how well they knew each other perfectly. Nothing about them was forced and they just seemed like they were meant to be! I lovelovelove your characterization of Remus! He is so sweet and nervous, but also not a prude like a lot of people make him out to be in fics. His chemistry with Sirius was just amazingly perfect. Ugh, I keep using the word perfect, but I just can't think of a better word to use because, well, this IS perfect!
I also really adored how this poem was like a story (with dialogue and everything), but still had the flow and feel of a poem. The flow was steady and beautiful, as was the wording.
I was going to pick my favorite part to tell you, but I just pick one! I loved all the stanzas so much!
Thanks again! I really really appreciate this! It's such a beautiful piece. Sorry it took me so long to review it, though.
| narrowskies 10/9/11 . chapter 1
that was so freaking cuteee!
i adore Remmius, and this was just so sweet and just ugh.
| lonely hands 10/7/11 . chapter 1
Oh wow. Gah, I do love me some freeverse, but you really have a way with words. I've been veering away from RemusSirius, but you've got me hook, line and sinker.
I adore how Remus is a 'prude' and the sad puppy act from Sirius. It's so cute!
| Someone aka Me 10/2/11 . chapter 1
Gah! This is amazing!
First off, I absolutely adore freeverse, and you did a fantastic job with the style!
Second, this pairing is just amazing (and yes, that needed to be said).
One grammar thing:
"wasn't you the
of you all?"
should be "WEREN'T you the prude".
Other than that, great!
This is my favorite part:
" you were happy you had
just so you had
tim at him
collarbone with your finger"
| evol love 9/28/11 . chapter 1
aw. beautiful. great writing.