"Harkness, if you do that again, you'll join the ghosts here!" I love that line! :D I look forward to seeing more... One thing though, Donna's "I better not fall down any stairs" thing is funny, just maybe if you used it a few times less a chapter and had here say other things too, otherwise it might get a bit wearing. Otherwise, BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER! XD

Interesting story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter:)