   Asukaforever92 4/15/11 . chapter 4Dude please get back to this because I'm dying to see what happens next. |
| unimportant 7/7/06 . chapter 4 it is Naoko Akagi isn't it |
| Kawaii Plushie Fetish 3/3/05 . chapter 4 MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Misato X Kaji, and no clothing! W00t! You are a diety...I worship you...Please post... |
| Loni 9/30/04 . chapter 4 LoL, I loved what you've written so far, it's so funny and I want to read the rest of it! _ |
| BRS 6/18/04 . chapter 4 OMG WRITE THE REST OF THE STORY AND POST IT THAT IS SO DAMN FUNNY! |
| The Mad shoe 6/15/04 . chapter 4 Still wierd, still funny.
Great fic. |
| Knight's Shadow 5/25/04 . chapter 4 Please update soon.I'm really liking original too! |
| bsdisaster 4/24/04 . chapter 3 i have to get this done as fast as possible. if i read one of those lines again i wont be able to stop laughing for the next days. great work (good thing the story is shinjirei) |
| sydneyeliza 4/5/04 . chapter 3 lol! It's very good, please do continue soon! I'll be checking back on this one! |
| Se 6/5/03 . chapter 3 isn't there anyone who knows how to type a ΓΌ? |
| The Mad shoe 1/20/03 . chapter 3 Well, it was fun as hell, whatelse is there to say?
Rei/Shinji rules! |
| Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 1/1/03 . chapter 3 OMG! OMG! This is so hysterically funny! I love it! Love it! (I adore OOC Eva fics, I think they're a scream, and yours is one of the best!) More I say! More! |
| beege 11/2/02 . chapter 3 Hmmmmm. First of all it's worth pointing out that not only is this not a serious story, but I don't even take the writing of it seriously, so it's hardly in the same league as Evanjellydoughnut and Intentions. I'm devoting most of my creative energy to other ( Eva ) fanfic projects. On long chapters vs short chapters - I wrote chapter two in one rapid burst when the idea struck so I'm not surprised if it seems more vital than either of the others. Given that this fic is basically a premise for a series of funny sketches anyway the chapters will never be that long. Finally, that wasn't Kaworu bashing in chapter three, it was PARODY of how Kaworu is sometimes portrayed in some other fanfiction, naming no names. This story is basically an excuse to poke fun at everything even vaguely related to Eva, after all. |
| Nova 11/2/02 . chapter 3 Same old Kaworu bashing, but humerous nonetheless. Don't bother with longer chapters - chp2 was (i believe) the shortest, yet still the funniest. |
| Kenshiro Mitsui -san 10/29/02 . chapter 3 haha, this is pretty good. not quite like evanjellydonut, but a good effort and a funny story nonetheless |
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