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| unimportant 2006-07-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseit is Naoko Akagi isn't it |
| Kawaii Plushie Fetish 2005-03-03 ch 4,  | abuseMWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Misato X Kaji, and no clothing! W00t! You are a diety...I worship you...Please post... |
| Loni 2004-09-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseLoL, I loved what you've written so far, it's so funny and I want to read the rest of it! ^_^ |
| BRS 2004-06-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseOMG WRITE THE REST OF THE STORY AND POST IT THAT IS SO DAMN FUNNY! |
| The Mad shoe 2004-06-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseStill wierd, still funny. Great fic. |
| Knight's Shadow 2004-05-25 ch 4, anon. | abusePlease update soon.I'm really liking this.Pretty original too! |
| bsdisaster 2004-04-24 ch 3, | abusei have to get this done as fast as possible. if i read one of those lines again i won`t be able to stop laughing for the next days. great work (good thing the story is shinji+rei) |
| sydneyeliza 2004-04-05 ch 3, | abuselol! It's very good, please do continue soon! I'll be checking back on this one! |
| Se 2003-06-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseisn't there anyone who knows how to type a ΓΌ?! |
| The Mad shoe 2003-01-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell, it was fun as hell, whatelse is there to say? Rei/Shinji rules!!!!!! |
| Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 2003-01-01 ch 3, | abuseOMG! OMG! This is so hysterically funny! I love it! Love it! (I adore OOC Eva fics, I think they're a scream, and yours is one of the best!) More I say! More! |
| beege 2002-11-02 ch 3, | abuseHmmmmm. First of all it's worth pointing out that not only is this not a serious story, but I don't even take the writing of it seriously, so it's hardly in the same league as Evanjellydoughnut and Intentions. I'm devoting most of my creative energy to other ( Eva ) fanfic projects. On long chapters vs short chapters - I wrote chapter two in one rapid burst when the idea struck so I'm not surprised if it seems more vital than either of the others. Given that this fic is basically a premise for a series of funny sketches anyway the chapters will never be that long. Finally, that wasn't Kaworu bashing in chapter three, it was PARODY of how Kaworu is sometimes portrayed in some other fanfiction, naming no names. This story is basically an excuse to poke fun at everything even vaguely related to Eva, after all. |
| Nova 2002-11-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseSame old Kaworu bashing, but humerous nonetheless. Don't bother with longer chapters - chp2 was (i believe) the shortest, yet still the funniest. |
| Kenshiro Mitsui -san 2002-10-29 ch 3, | abusehaha, this is pretty good. not quite like evanjellydonut, but a good effort and a funny story nonetheless |
| Death Angel 2002-10-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseHe...HeHe....HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! That was hilarious!!! What happened to Ritsuko,anyway....? Oh, well. I'm sure she'll show up somewhere. Maybe she got caught in the Kaworu-Rei Crossfire........ |