Is the bold print from the book? you have the book?

*grins* I only gots one thing to say... Best one I have read of yours yet! Can't wait to see what else you come up with. It was witty, smexy with out being overly so, well written and fun to read. _ great job!

wow I didnt think you come make that a one shot... but you did

am i the only reader who caught the merchant of venice reference?

This totally made my day. LOL The quick dialogue and heated exchanges... awesome! Well done Paisley! :)

Fantastic! For once someone gets the characters right!

"Who says I want your company?"

"You." He purred.

Oof. Probably my favorite part in the whole story. I really like how you write Jareth, but this line? Golden.

Wow Paisley, you can create a guy we would all just love to be real. For once in my life I would love to meet (and more) your Jareth. Sigh…..

Lovely and amusing, especially the little exchange between you and Jareth at the end :)

awesome!

What a cute little story :) I enjoyed reading this very much, thanks for sharing! Hopefully it'll get me back into gear with my own Labyrinth story, since I've seem to hit a bit of a 'bump', so to speak, and an irritating one at that u_u Anyhow, I loved the story (as I do most of your Labyrinth fics ;) ) and hope you will continue with your wonderful works.

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Nice. Very

This. Was. Perfect. 3 I love that song! And then you go and turn it into this awesome story. You are made of epic win. And now I must go listen to that song on repeat and read the story again. 3 The song has a whole new meaning to me now. Cha-ching!

*grinning* Nice.

I'm so glad talented people like you still write fanfic for Labyrinth! Thank you for the fic! I enjoyed it!