Please update soon! Loving the story so far hope you continue writing :)

i'm really enjoying this story, you're doing a good job:) sorry about your crush and your friend, that wasn't very nice of them! anyways, keep up the good work and update soon!

good story keep writing

I'm sad that it was so short but thank you for updating this! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Well, here is my review. Looking forward to next chapters :)

I can say that this is good, but it really hasn't interested me yet.

This is so so so great! Please write more!

Update soon? I miss reading your fanfic. :(

I really like it, my only thingy is that Griffin I'd awfully trusting.

Another fantastic chapter! I just love where this is going.

It's great so far, I like where the story is going :)

Like Marie King said, just check up on your grammar, but so far so good. Keep it up! :)

Great start! I hope you choose to continue. Lauras personality is awesome. I love that she's just as cocky as griffin is. Longer chapter would be nice but don't stress over it.

An interesting start keep up but do try and proofread your next couple of chapters but other than that you are really good