Laphiji x Ishtar ftw! 33 Lol, I lurv Laphiji XD

WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND GUT YOU LIKE A FISH!

Well, the only thing I think you should get fixed right now is the length of the story. You're moving a bit fast and telling us so little, there's almost no details... :(

But it's a good plot! An interesting idea and a nice way to set them up. :)