Keep going this is amazing. Only good thing i've read in a long time.

Awesome chapter :)

I loved the last one as well xD

Update soon?

I like what you've done so far and I think it'll be interesting to see where this goes. I'm usually not a fan of OC's but yours seems to fit in well so I don't have any complaints about it. I think your grammar needs a little tightening up but beyond that you're pretty good. Keep it going.

hey, this is really good...the characters are not OOC as said before, and I like Clear's personality... Nothing is held back here, and it's realistic.

This is amazing :3

Really well written and none of the characters are OOC :)

Update soon?