Please continue this story. I think it is a very good concept on retelling the story of the movie. I like the idea of Pepper and Allison befriending each other early on. I see that it has been a while since you updated. Please do not give up on this story.

love this so far! hoping to read more of it later!

i'd still like to read some more. I kind of like it

It's not horrible, just very abrupt. It feels a bit like you're rushing, or trying to force it. You just got to calm down and relax a bit. Be patient. Let the story come to you. It's got some potential, as do you. I wish you the best of luck with the next chapter.

It's wonderful keep on going. I think you got your groove still!

This is a awesome story keep it up. I could picture this in the movie congrats!

i love this story and i love cry-baby please update soon.

By all means, please continue. It's different, and interesting, and I'd like to read more of it.

update you have 12 telling your somehting i have one i saying i want you to continue please continue!

Interesting idea. I wish there was more Crybaby fanfiction too, but I just never get around to writing any myself. I like the idea of Allison befriending the gang a different way, and I don't think anyone really likes Lenora or Baldwin.

I love your story, a think it's a very interesting twist, and hope you'll consider continuing it because I would most definitely read it!:)

this is an awesome story. I love it. I hope you continue it, because that would be awesome.

You should update its very interesting I want to know whats going to happen

i think you should. i wanna see where this goes

Great idea for an AU. Will you continue? Catch ya on the flip side.