Wow, this was awesome! Short and sweet. Really effective. I really like the way you write it all out. Keep going! :)

Ooh, and I just found your sequel for this. Can't wait to read it! :)

This story was too cute! I smiled the entire time! I would say I wish there was more to this, but I actually like the way it ended. It was cute but not overbearingly. Well done!

Nice story! You should continue.

Good story

very sexyyyyy. keep going. i like the tone of it.

This was so cute! But it seriously needs another chapter! Lol , anyway great job!

Cliffhanger? in a OneShot? That's mean... kind of.. I love your writing style and I'd like to know how everything went on

PLEASE tell me there's going to be a second chapter, because this was super interesting! I would love to read another chapter, so I encourage a second chapter to this one -

aw! you should have made this two chapters. it would be great! I still like the story though

i like this it it very cute(:

I love this awesome oneshot. Great job.

very funny : ) great job, are you going to do a second chapter?

This was awesome

this is really good. r u going to continue? eh ill add it to story alert anyway.

Good Story, But Next Time Please Skip Lines, so it won't be one giant headache to read.