This was really good. Very emotional! Everyone feels hurt and confused and has mixed feelings for each other. Well written :).

Saddd

But good job writing it. -thumbs up-

Whoa, well i can't think of any better words but five stars.

poor remus! poor severus, too, completely blind!

very intense, i liked it. i wish you'd do another hermione/severus story soon. i love your writing :)

Love and pain are so closely related.

Magical or otherwise, first-love hearts stand naked before the object of their desire... Onw wonders how any of us survive those first forays into this most wonderful and awful of journys ...

Meow. Your stories always manage to rip my heart apart and put it back together. Or in this case, it was left a bit cracked. Lovely job.

This is awesome. You capture the agony and intensity of the adolescent/teenage yearning and need just perfectly. You feel the heartbeat. Love this.

I love the subtle ways the dynamics of the relationships shift throughout the story. Poor Severus... I think he feels something for Remus, but his love for Lily (or infatuation perhaps) is keeping him from truly understanding or expressing it. Poor Remus too... he's such a gentle heart. I wish things had turned out better for them, but some things aren't meant to be.

Thanks for such a wonderful tale!