This is an excellent chapter. It was so good to hear the other side of the phone call and everyone's reaction. I am now so excited to read the next chapter. The raid on the island is going to be so cool. But I pray that they make it in time...otherwise Scott, Penny and Brains time will be up. Please please please update soon:)

Damn you for a cliff-hangering person! Write the next chapter, whydoncha? I'm on pins and needles here...

By the way, your pacing is excellent and the Tracy boys are perfectly in character, as is Jeff.

Now rescue Scott, won't you?

Exciting! If Sir Reuben is going to bomb the complex then there's no time to wait for the rest of the raiding team. Loved how Virgil wanted to take Thunderbird One, forgetting that it wouldn't fit his brothers. Face masks are a must on this mission. Even though Virgil was wearing sunglasses he made an appearance at Scott and Lola's wedding! Freddy might make an unwanted connection. So, Sir Reuben knows about the raid and had the MI5 bug removed from his office. Wouldn't it be fun if Sir R. was right there when John retrieved the I.R Bug from his office? Brains won't be happy to be separated from Scott and Penny. Freddy won't be happy to be thrown in WITH them! Can't wait to see the Tracys in commando mode! Looking forward to what's next! Great stuff!

brilliant chapter

I sincerely hope Sir Reuben gets his comeuppance, he is seriously cold-hearted, evil, while wonderfully created character. I liked John's subtle persuasion to get Alan to pilot TB2, though I do wonder if he will stay out of the action. I'm intrigued to see how Freddy reacts to Scott when he sees him. Can't wait for your next update Bee.

A very exciting story! Thanks for the update. Looking forward to next. :)

... and he has no idea International Rescue just heard every word. (He REALLY should be more afraid of that right now, not that he knows it.)

Great chapter, and have I ever mentioned that your cliffhangers are evil?

Can things get any worse. All i know is that that guys thunderbird4's are not going to work like Gordon's bird. Would be nice to see all those birds come out only to die after a mile or so. Then i would really have a good laugh. Please don't hurt Scott and the others even more?

Whoo for John's bug meaning that they are all still in the loop. He's so used to hearing everything from up in Five, why make it any different now?

Well, it was such a hardship having to read this more than once. And nope, there wasn't any less squealing this time as there was the first time around, you are building the tension up so fantastically. I'm dying to find out how this rescue is going to come off, smallest thing wrong could mean that they are all blown up.

Love the explanation for why Jeff wasn't believing Freddy! What can I say, I love everything about this, it's a fantastic story!

Loving this chapter Bee. So can't wait for the action to begin now lol. so looking forward to the next one and can't wait xx

Hey Bee will done on this chapter. So sorry its token me so long to review had a busy couple of days and just catching up now. so looking forward to what you have planned next and yea i am still writing to stories at once

Oh my gosh! Get back here and tell me what is happening! Why doesn't Jeff believe him? Jeff, you moron, he's telling the truth, you have to do something! And now Freddy is all in trouble himself, but yay for Sir R realising that things might not quite be going his way after all!

Love how Freddy's character has developed, how that now he is fighting back because he knows (or believes, I'm still not sure who Sahara will help more!) that no one else is going to do it for him. You go, Freddy! Just a shame that he got caught out doing so.

Can't wait for the next update! This is such an intense and exciting story, fantastically written!

Wow... I did not expect that the call was actually from Freddy. I love that u did that. But Freddy is in for a world of pain and time is running out for Scott, Penny and Brains. Surely Sir Reuben would need to get rid of evidence of his misgivings, including his captives. I'd love to be on Tracy island when that call came through. I'm sure chaos erupted after that call, esp. the part about Scott running out of time. Great chapter, it is the perfect way for sir Reuben to come unstuck. Please please please update soon:)

Thanks for the update, exciting chapter. Hope to see another update soon. :)

brilliant hope there's more soon