Totally great. I mean, not much other stories made the emotion and stuff so real, as if you were the person in the story.

you do really great dbz stories. the idea of vegetas anger were great. favs

Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword didn't kow how right they were. I've read a lot of fantastic emotional peices in my time, but this is the first where I've felt every ounce of a character's anger and frustration and bitterness and deppression in to one jumbled masterpiece.

Great job.

This is really very good! This is very interesting, it wasn't very personal on either side but gave us a glimpse of the deeper on-goings of the saiyan rivals, as they battled.

(This is Chibminshiy, I ma just not logged in and dont have the time to do so before I leave school, Tomorrow is the start of summer!)

You write some of the most powerful stuff I've seen. Excellent work!

Nice look at the thoughts running through those two warriors' minds at

that time, _ Great work, I'm loving your writing more and more as I read

through it. :)

Wow.

Very Nice!

BEAUTIFUL! WONDERFUL! EXCELLENT! PERFECTION! You are a very talented writer! I've been looking for a story like this for sooo long...I love the way you portrayed Goku's thoughts about Vegeta, and how Vegeta seemed to fighting himself...IT WAS POSSITIVELY WONDERFUL! Keep up your fabulous work!

Ack! You mean person! How cuold you end it like that? Really!

*sigh* Ah well, all in all? Great fic! Nice and angsty! . Loved it love it, yeahah I did! I always like the little Goku/Vegeta friendship fics. This was fabulous. Great work. Sequal? Hm?

Sayonara!

T-Sama

Wow, that was really really good! Deep! I really enjoyed reading that, definitely an outstanding Majin Vegeta fic, not just more of the same. Good job.

Wow...this was truly great! You picked the perfect choice of words, and everything was awesome. Great job! Keep it up!

Another very good story. You have a knack for this angsty/drama stuff. Good job. ::gives a thumbs-up::

yeah! more Majin stuff!

I love it when a truly tallented (or maybe disfunctional) person writes about Vegeta. They do so well with soul wrentching angst. Vegeta is definately my all time favorite character, I was just like him in highschool only less outwardly violent. What I would like to see along with the Majin stugg is some crossover Ryoko/Vegeta fics.

Great story!

Nice! This was really good, I like DBZ just as much as anybody else but sometimes the episodes leave a little more to be desired. This was a great insight. Keep up the great work, Lilianna :)