That's really, really a great one! However, I read your story once until a certain point.. but lost track at all.
I hope you will go on to release it - until it's finished! (Which is harder as some would expect, I know) Anyway, I was somewhat confused first, when I tried another look for it an it had disappeared... but it's back! you've got one more reader ;)
Deraptor 10/2/11 . chapter 1
Hell, yeah!
I was really worried about what happened to your previous fanfic, as, quite honestly, it was the best fanfiction I've read. Watching it slowly die wasn't fun at all.
I'm really excited to know you finally finished your story and can't wait to read it all. I'll probably read everything again as you release it. It's definitely worth it. :)