More please.

Well done. I like that her hair bites her.

Certainly diferent and in some respects (the backstory of the gorgon race) may even have more potential than my version! Having written my take on the Watch gorgon in "Bad Hair Day", and having stuck closely to the original Greek myth for a lot of good-seeming reasons, it's interesting to see how somebody else handles the same material...

very good looking forward to the next chapter