So happy I found this one. It's amazing! :D

Exceptional imagery and a very enjoyable story! Loved it!

Ahhhhhhhhhh smexy..this is so them hahaha..i love this! great!

aww cute, but the lemon was short still adorable though, and nice detail :P

OMG *melts* that was so awesome I wish I had words for this it was witty and sexy and overall cute. To read this it is almost like being in Akihiko's mind, the thrill of the hunt the satisfaction of landing your prey and the thrill in the struggle... Genius pure unadulterated genius

This story was extremely creative, with the attacker and the prey aspect. The wording fit the situation and plot perfectly. I love how the descriptions were very well thought out and so much emotion and metaphors went into it to bring it to life instead of what many fanfics are just blunt dirty sex with no feeling behind it. Bravo for such a heart felt story, i really do love your writing style and the way you think and how you always seem to keep the reader in suspense and wanting more. Keep up the fantastic work!

Very nicely written! Just the right amount of sensuality and obsession. Resistance and compliance. Too many writers think Misaki is just the words he utters when he says 'no'. But a more important aspect of Misaki is the thoughts he keeps in his head, that he's almost too embarrassed to give voice to. He's just a bit too emotionally immature to admit to himself that he's committed to his relationship to Usami on every level. Except, of course, in volume 14 when he thinks to himself how his body has been craving being touched by Usami because it's been a while.

So, having said all of that you can guess that I really enjoyed your story, and that I think you got the characterizations just right. Thanks.

I loved this story! It's very erotic and sensual. I don't like when authors merely describe boring action and body parts in lemons, I like when they describe what the characters are feeling. That's why i loved your story. :)

Keep it up!

What a delightful little fic. So well written. It flows beautifully and the descriptors are wonderfully erotic. All the metaphors carried throughout, of the prey and the hunger, very potent.

"bluster being replaced with something far more base" lovely.

"Misaki's vocalisations have been reduced to incoherent noises by the time Akihiko is nearly done. His thighs are hot and damp, his eyes glazed over in a kind of stupor. They stare up helplessly at Akihiko, heavy-lidded and burning." so sensual.

Very well played. Thank you.

love it!

Don't apologise for writing a good story! I will never be able to watch/read the series again without thinking of Akihiko as a hungry beast catching his un-suspecting prey. XD

This was very interesting to read. I love the primal factor ;) very sexy. Thanks for a good read!

loved the story!