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Reviews for: Evil Deeds
Sex Toy 2000 5/3/06 . chapter 1
I like the fic so far...you need to work on your grammar a bit and you should indent on a new line when a new speaker starts talking. Other than that the fic is very good keep it up!
Bluemermaid3280 5/14/02 . chapter 4
Great story! longingly await for the next chapter..
dbz fan 4/26/02 . chapter 1
nice story continue it
dbz fan 4/26/02 . chapter 1
nice story continue it
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