This story is so interesting, i can't wait to see what happens next!

My only question so far...Redcaps are malevolent, murderous little b*stards that usually kill lost travelers They've a need to kill regularly, or they themselves will die. Well, traditionally with English and Celtic folklore, which it seems youre going for. Even going with White Wolfs interpretation they are vicious and cruel, and nothing like Hoggle, so I kinda fail to see why you'd label him as such?

Omg please finish this!

good storyline so far but will sarah ever get what she wants for once apart from jareth that is :P please write more

after reading this chapter it reminded me of a picture off of deviant art. here is the link. ?qjareth%20and%20sarah&order9&offset168#/d1ckdyn

I love this. do you plan to write more? or a sequel?

Hey I know you have a life but could you please update soon? Please?

When will you update?

wow. this story is getting intense with each chapter. i can't wait to see mab's reaction about the seelie's court decision. you are doing a wonderful job. please continue with this story and update again as soon as you can.

I am sooo loving this story...but this chapter. WOW... just wow! I love your take on Jareth in this one. He's cruel, wicked, quick and tricky *purrrrrr* Can't wait until you post more. :)

good like always. so cant wait for the next chapter.

I think someone (hint Jareth) needs to set down with Sarah and explain to her how the rules go around here before she makes more messes of things. She Means well... but nothing seems to go the way she would like when she interferes.

And what was up with her father not accepting a bride fee for her and then asking for one? Bit wishy-washy if you ask me. And confusing.

Thanks for writing.

This was good you capture the people well please write more

Aw man the Underground is a really crazy place...poor Sarah! How is she gonna get out of this one?

She shouldve just left Jareth kill Lord whatever the heck his name is. Jeez he doesnt even know her name!

Poor Sarah having her biological father disown her. Oh well she will be better off without him. Update again soon please!