Please wright another chapter

I take it at the time you wrote this you hadn't seen the season finale. Tony/Jane is definitely going somewhere. In the meantime, though, you could totally continue this, but you need to fix the English. I know English isn't your native language but you could have a beta help you with it. It's hard to read the way it is, and although you paint a neat picture, the grammatical mistakes are distracting.

Great start. Please continue.

Just found this story. Great chapter. Please continue.

Why is the summary in English and the story itself in Spanish?

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