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| Reviews for Naruto: Mirror flower, Water moon |
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   MaKayla McKinze 5/27/13 . chapter 6I would have thought that Hinata would have been better off with Suzumeibachi... |
| eiyuuou 4/26/13 . chapter 6 What? No other chapters? |
| wacko12 4/9/13 . chapter 1 you might want to work on making the paragraphs easier to read, that's all |
| moonshadowcuteness1 1/21/13 . chapter 3 Damn |
| aspygirlredo 1/17/13 . chapter 1 It's been a year and a month since you last posted a chapter for this fantastic story! Are you dead or just a bitch/bastard who enjoys making their readers angry when you abandon a story like this?! |
| sierra 1/6/13 . chapter 6 This is so dramatic! I adore it! |
| luketzoner 11/13/12 . chapter 6 how nice, making naruto this manipulative bastard, i like that, all this fics making naruto this retard always smiling when in pain, iadaada, it makes me feel sick. please continue this fic, its one of the best that i have ever read. peace |
| Snake King 10/31/12 . chapter 6 Dude when are you gonna add the rest of the chapters? |
| Random Chick 10/1/12 . chapter 1 What, no shirt? |
| Darkness's Messenger 9/27/12 . chapter 6 Excellent job so far TobiMax23. I love how you completely destroyed Sakura, she's almost as useless as Orihime. As for why Naruto is asking Hinata to kill her teammates and Kurenai, I think it's a test of her loyalty to her, and I suspect that her teammates and Kurenai are part of Kyoka Suigetsu's illusions. Also, I have an idea for you for Kyoka Suigetsu's Bankai. Instead of merely creating illusions, its Bankai would be able to manipulate reality itself. Simply put, instead of completely controlling the opponent's 5 senses, the Bankai would allow Naruto to control reality itself. Yes, I realize that that Bankai is completely overpowered, but this IS a godlike Naruto story, and Kyoka Suigetsu's Shikai itself is already ridiculously overpowered. Anyways, it seems like this story might be abandoned or dead. If that's the case, then I was wondering if I'd be able to adopt this story and continue it, as I really like the way it's going so far, and I have several ideas that I like. If you're still working on it, or you just want to keep it, then I completely understand. Either way, keep up the great work! |
| FaithfulAizen 3/24/12 . chapter 6 Man I love betrayal stories anyway update soon |
| Hahp Ends 1/1/12 . chapter 6 This is quite an enjoyable read, and I hope it stays as such into the future. How you killed Sakura was a pleasant change to how some writers just kill her like it was nothing. Having Hinata kill her teammates and Kurenai, the person who "filled the void of her mother", is a good way to test her loyalty; as well as cutting more of her ties to the village. I can only wonder what Naruto has in store for everyone. |
| raveman2 12/28/11 . chapter 6 Well this will be good. |
| Lady Kaiki 12/23/11 . chapter 6 Awesome story ! Plz, update soon ! |
| Frostfire613 12/21/11 . chapter 6 ...Naruto is so evil...and I don't like evil hinata though i kinda like evil naruto O.o |
