Hiya!

You know what...I totally liked where this story is going but this chap is just totally rushed! This would be wonderful if you kinda wrote it in more detail so...yeah, it was just too fast!

But this is good. :)

Awww. This story is a bit sad. I think I know who the surrogate mother is. But I hope she won't become Ichi's mistress! Haha. Please don't break our hearts. :( Anyways, please update soon! Nice job! :)

omg! orihime is the surrogate mother isn,t she..

aww i can just tell this is gona be a good story.. so please keep writing! )

I must have shallow tear ducts...this chapter already made me cry a little...keep writing...

I don't know much about medical science but it seems u've done ur research (r u an aspiring doctor?). I love this story, but I wish u'd spent more time on the first miscarriage that Rukia had then as a reader we could've empathized more with her, find out about her condition, how it affects Ichigo and emotions of the characters would've been more analyzed. You write beautifully the poetic way of describing their emotions and life as general is really touching. but i think the story moves a bit fast bc ur setting such tranquil mood with the introduction and so many events happen. I don't know how to describe it, but please don't take it as a flame. The first chp and ur summary told me that maybe it was gonna go the Steel Magnolia way, but it's not, it's going to be so emotional/dramatic on a different level. i can't wait for the next chapter.

nice story so far...keep it up...

i wonder if surrogate motherhood will be included here or ichigo will have another woman just for him to have a child of his own...oh the drama...i can't wait...