|Reviews for Fatal Mistake|
| Guest 12/14/12 . chapter 1
whic book is this
| miny-universal 2/25/12 . chapter 1
so far it is rearly good. you are a good writer and i love the story. can you peace cary on.
| Sierra of the Stars 1/27/12 . chapter 1
Good start. I hope you update soon.
| K8yx 1/9/12 . chapter 1
Any chance your going to update as i'd really love to find out what happens. The start is excellent and very intiguing. Your writing style is very good, and i like the description. Love the twist at the end. Update soonx
| Raina 11/7/11 . chapter 1
Ah i can feel the tension already. I have a feeling this story is going to be good. Update soon
| Angelmail 11/3/11 . chapter 1
oooh, interesting! your writing is very good! i'm looking forward to finding out more, please update soon!
| ablondeinaunionjack 10/6/11 . chapter 1
First of all - Rat and Anneena! I'm so glad I'm not the only one who ships them! Excellent start, very intriguing - there were a couple of misplaced apostrophes towards the end but otherwise it was very good. Update soon!