| Reviews for Fatal Mistake |
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Guest 12/14/12 . chapter 1 whic book is this |
miny-universal 2/25/12 . chapter 1so far it is rearly good. you are a good writer and i love the story. can you peace cary on. |
Sierra of the Stars 1/27/12 . chapter 1Good start. I hope you update soon. |
K8yx 1/9/12 . chapter 1Any chance your going to update as i'd really love to find out what happens. The start is excellent and very intiguing. Your writing style is very good, and i like the description. Love the twist at the end. Update soonx |
Raina 11/7/11 . chapter 1 Ah i can feel the tension already. I have a feeling this story is going to be good. Update soon |
Angelmail 11/3/11 . chapter 1oooh, interesting! your writing is very good! i'm looking forward to finding out more, please update soon! Angelmail x |
ablondeinaunionjack 10/6/11 . chapter 1First of all - Rat and Anneena! I'm so glad I'm not the only one who ships them! Excellent start, very intriguing - there were a couple of misplaced apostrophes towards the end but otherwise it was very good. Update soon! |