That was sad. But she made the right choice. It must be akward every time they fight each other.

So sad... I'm cying now...!

oh...cool. really. A desert eagle is a gun or something, right? nice ending.

That was really good! Are you gonna write another chapter?

Can you read my X-men fic?

I love your bio. It's the reason I give for not going to my classes. :)

Trinity/Smith? O_o? WOW! This is a great story... I like it! I really, really like it! I thought there was no way Trinity/Smith could work except as rapefic, but this is amazing! :D

Oh GOD, I never thought I could be made to feel sad for an Agent...

You stun me with the beauty of your writing. It is so true to the feel of the movie-verse... so *right* and yet so painfully ... painful.

Wow.

Thank you for writing these!

I read a review for your Immortality fic that alluded to something with Smith and Trin and now i understand. It makes me laugh to think of having Smith as a boyfriend, especially if i was someone as gorgeous and kick-ass as Trinity - he's so droll! *snickers* Anyways, you have a very distinctive writing style that can only be described as laid-back satire passed off as seriousness, and i love it! This was a good story except for the unoriginal-ness of Morpheus's lines. I loved the part about her thinking that Jones and Brown are gay hehe (then you included that in your latest story - so funny!) anyways, i'll stop mooning over your great cynicism and just say keep it up )

This is a different perspective which is actually quite interesting. I enjoyed this story, it brings a new take on Trinity.

Trinity and Smith, huh?...Smith seemed a little bit out of character. I'd like to see how they got together in the first place, and what it is about her that attracted him.

Hey, Chaos! i'm here to review your story! Its great! perfect! coolio! anyway, later! keep up the good work!

Later!

Sakura

That's good but weird, Trinity and Smith oooo...that's weird. I once thought about that idea, it was really strange but good pairing.

Whoops. I found a few typos. And some of the dialogue is lifted straight from the film ... sigh.

Centaur: Go on. Write it. I dare you. :)

I'm all for weird Trinity pairings (I'm dying for a Trinity/Cypher, and think a Trinity/Switch could be awesome if done properly) and I think a good Trinity/Smith could be really cool. But, as (probably) the most prolific Trinity writer here, I found her to be out of character. Also, I doubt Morpheus could have watched Trinity carefully enough to want to pull her out without noticing that she was sleeping with an Agent.

That said, I did like your Smith, and your Morpheus was all right. And the idea on the whole was *new*, which is always cool. I think it would be interesting to somehow try crossing post-unplugging Trinity with Smith (though not in the universe created by this story). And I really liked the "my name is Trinity" line, because for some reason, I don't think she likes to be called "Trin", lol. I'd like more insight into Smith's perspective, though.

Jones looking at her... very funny.

I like her shooting Smith at the end, even though he tries to reason with her... such a typical rebel response. Though I guess she's wondering if he actually means what he says anyway.

It's a very good point to wonder about how Neo would respond to finding out who her ex is...