You've got some good ideas going on, but you could put a bit more detail into the chapters

I haven't even looked at this book for years, but I might have to look it up the next time I go to the library. I can't even remember most of the characters, I just remember how sad the ending was. Great job, by the way. If you can get someone who hasn't read this book for ages back into it, you're doing something right!

write more, i like it!

Like the story. You've got some good ideas too. Please continue

Hi. I read your real steel story and at the end of one of the chapters you said you have a BTT story and I was like OMG I love BTT. So i came to read this story and I love it. You are a very good writer and I can't wait to hear more from you.

I think your writing is good, even though I haven't read Bridge to Terabithia. I like to write myself, so I know that some encouragment is wonderful. Your discription are awesome and I will read more of this if/when you write it. just one suggestion: maybe try to put a little more into your chapter, if this is the first chapter by itself. otherwise, you are doing great! Keep it up! :)

good but i like miss edmunds. you should seriously turn this script into and actual movie or book.

Omgg. I love BTT myself, watched movie like 90 times, favorite movie as a kid and it still is to this day. :)

THIS. IS. AMAAAAZAAAAHHHH

PLEASE WRITE MORE. OR MY ADHDNESS WILL KILL ME FROM WAAAITIIINGGG

Sorry about that x"3

-Cat

keep it up! must see leslie again!

Great, I already want to see what happens in the next chapter :).

that's cool!