|Reviews for Happy Birthday, Regulus|
| a mountain of gideon's scones 10/9/11 . chapter 1
Awww, that was so cute! I love how you wrote it as the 25 years after his death, sort ofin the after life and he peered back at the people - Sirius, in particular - was really well done.
i like what you wrote, but it really hurt my eyes to read it because it's all bunched up in the one.
Yet i really did like it.
I'm keepign teh scores so you'll get the results soon, maybe next week :D
keep writing; it was really well done!
| yellow 14 10/5/11 . chapter 1
Just one big paragraph that is hard on the eyes. Break it up, please