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I've just read the french traduction of this OS
I want to let you know that I absolutely loved it
(sorry for my bad english)
thx for posting
bye

Cant help but feel sorry... :((

D'aaaaaaaaaaw. I'd give her a hug were I not in a different universe and in possession of an aversion to hugs.

I really liked it, the words seemed to flow effortlessly, and the poem added a very nice touch!

I love that you made her a singer. 3

...That's really depressing... Don't get me wrong, I'm jealous at how easily it all flows and the fact that there's a poem(I suck at poetry) but man, that just makes me wanna cry. D: Still, I like it. Keep it up!