can't get over the fact that sakura blinded herself on purpose and for real. oh no!

I'm glad you're back to writing again ; ;

Well more like, back to multi-chapped writing.

It's been a while since I've read a non-AU story with SasuSaku, and a decently written one at that. Of course yours goes beyond decent [;

Anywhoo, I'm loving the intricate plan and twists (cough. the clay birds..) you got here, obviously you've thought it through and have an actual plot-line going on.

The nicely paced scenes feel so much like a movie that I feel my brain & eyes are going to burst (I swore my heart was going to implode right near the end when the explosions occured...yeah, talk about getting too much into it).

Even though it is technically 'AU,' you have it done in a way that it is so believable and JUST, gah. Not that I am surprised at all [:

I feel like there is totally the third chapter curse I never have reviews on my 3rd chapters! Anywho! Great story I'm glad it's turning out longer than expected. Please tell me that Itichi is gonna bitch slap some damn sense into his younger brother. He needs it. Like alot.

Looking forward to your updates!

Wow, this story is going great so far!

I really adored your characterization of Sasuke and Sakura, they are written so perfectly in character.

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the plot is really unique, and I hope that we find out what Deidera's planning soon. :)

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sky's traffic

Oh my good Lawd!Sakura,why did you do that?It's either you value Naruto so much or you're just plain crazy (or both).

Anyway,a part of me was a bit estatic when Sakura dropped the pouch but I guess it's too soon to hope for Sasuke to find out the all,this is only the third !Good job on keeping the suspense in every chapter.I can't wait to read more. :)

I don't speak english very well. But I loved the fic!

Kisses

Instant faaaaavorite! Thank you for this wonderful pic! It's nicely written. Kudos to authors like you who can pull off ninja-fics. They're definitely a lot harder to write! Hope to read the next chapter soon!

Loved it. I love the interactions! On to the next chapter!

Absolutely loved the first chapter. I'm itching to click 'next'! Here goes!

Mind blown away.

MIND BLOWN AWAY.

Your plot twists are wonderful and I'd love to read more! :3

This is fantastic. I hope Sakura isn't blind forever...:3

so nice! )

God, you really know how to leave your readers hanging!

This was really a good chapter and I love the way you write. But please don't keep us waiting too long! I really love reading your story...

really cool chapter!

I really love all the characters you put together!

NiCe!