Reviews for Scent
BuckingFitch 10/3/11 . chapter 1
There's going to be more right? This was so AWESOME the twists turns suspense and I actually screamed I didn't see that coming! Please update and continue this story its AMAZING xx
silferdeath 10/3/11 . chapter 1
make it a two or a three shot i wanna know what ita is doing there xD

silfedeath
0.0' Kahli hime 10/3/11 . chapter 1
Oh Ice, another great work of yours huh :D

Oh I liked this first, but got a little confused with this Itachi-kun-thing.

Please just continue as fast as you can :)
The Scarlett Ribbon 10/3/11 . chapter 1
WHAT? How can you end it there? That is so cruel!

That last section with Sakura waking up had the real makings of a really good story - such an unexpected plot twist! I really want to know what happens next now, so you absolutely must update. Immediately.

Over all, I think your writing is lovely. The pace was just right, the characterisation good and the plot oddly compelling! A very enjoyable, engaging read - I really hope you continue this, cutecrazyice!
Guest 10/3/11 . chapter 1
Love it! I want more!
Raina1 10/3/11 . chapter 1
This was an interesting piece. I hadn't expected that little plot twist at the end. About Karin... in what way can it be assumed that you hate her? This is the way she's treated by the characters in canon. I'd be more concerned if Suigetsu was nice to her. A fight scene between Sakura and Sasuke wouldn't have felt right, to be perfectly honest, and it would have interfered, I think, with the flow of the fic.

I am interested about Itachi's appearence at the end. It makes sense in context of the recent events of the manga so it didn't confuse me but I am curious about what role he may play in your story. I hope this isn't the end of your story.
Vampirette Knight 10/3/11 . chapter 1
Loved it :D Please continue, I can't wait to see how Itachi has something to do with Sakura. Tehee.
shkh4ever 10/3/11 . chapter 1
Let me say I really really like it. Well done. Sasuke was a little OOC but who's to say what he would be like after the war. I wonder in your story does Sasuke know about Itachi being reanimated? I kept thinking in the manga when all that happened that Itachi would help bring Sasuke back to normal-ville. But as of yet no such luck. He told Naruto I leave Sasuke to you, just what the heck was that. Kishi you suck. Also I wonder who Kabuto is reanimating next. I think it is Fugaku, Itachi and Sasuke's dad. But I am probably wrong. Anyways back to your wonderful story. I liked the interaction between Sasuke/Sakura and also Suigetsu/Sasuke very much. You did have me very sad thinking Sakura was blind, your such a cheeky little monkey for that. Also I wonder what Itachi is doing there and also why is Sakura scared? I'm looking forward to the rest. Thank you for all your hard work and sharing it with us. Until next time.
yamada.chibi 10/3/11 . chapter 1
IMO i think you should continue the story...it has potential...and it'd become a great multi-chapter story...but that's up to you...anyway an awesome job as always :D
Skyrere 10/3/11 . chapter 1
well, since I have not seen all the way to current, this is great. I love it. I have not yet met Sasuke's crew. :D

But I will soon enough. LOL
angel.in.hell.aih 10/3/11 . chapter 1
I LOVE the plot...you HAVE to make it a continuous series!pretty please?

Sasuke's thoughts were fine, even better than in "In Nine Days".

He seemed more war-hardened, but vulnerable at the same time. Normally I dislike reading him when he's characterized a such. Some authors make him seem a lot more gruff and arrongant(in a good way), but you seem to blend the two types together...ok, I don't know if that made a any sense (laughs*), but anyway, I loved this story/one shot, and I hope you make it a multichaptered fic :)

-luff and huggles from India
Princess Ren 10/3/11 . chapter 1
. . You hear? This is wonderful.. You've kept Sasuke in character and it doesn't seem out of place.. The twist was quite unexpected! Never knew it was merely a mission.. So what's next? This is not finish.. Seriously... You need to add more for this plot. It would be a waste if you didn't...

Post soon! Keep up the good work!
cherryjubilee 10/3/11 . chapter 1
That ending was pure evil! Please do finish it... and why is my Ita-kun visiting Sakura?
rikary 10/3/11 . chapter 1
i like it. the ending was unexpected to say at least. the way you hid and give subtle lines made it more interesting. continue.
the-clumsy-one 10/3/11 . chapter 1
wow! That was great. Please update soo ))
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