Wow... That was a professional ending. I enjoy your writing very highly, this was the first I ever read. You're just plain amazing, and I'm sad this story is over but I look forward to future ones. :)

Awww...what a sad chapter, but kind of happy at the same time. :,)
I love this story, and I'm really sad it's over. That scene when Blackbird killed Donna was kind of scary. I like the ending a lot. What would my writing teacher call that...a circular ending? I don't remember, but it doesn't matter-it was still AWESOME! :D
Love your writing!
-scarletfireblaze

Okay, this chapter made me feel better :)

I'm glad Donna got to have a happy ending.

Even if... y'know... she's dead... :(

Ah well, everyone dies at some point. BUT DONNA WAS TOO—

Okay, I'm not going to go into my whole she-shouldn't-have-died rant... I'm going to miss this story. Maybe I hardly reviewed, but I read every chapter... well maybe I forgot that last one, lol. But eventually I read them all, and loved them. I hope Donna makes a reappearance in any more stories you write.

I just realized I missed this chapter O.o awkward. I started the last one and was like wait... How did this happen? So yeah. Me is sad now. Hope the next chapter will make me feel better. *sniff*

Wow... I can't believe I haven't reviewed before. But you have talent. I love your stories, and this is just beautiful. The sadness, the despair, the darkness... I write that stuff a lot. In silence. I'm sorry abouts your depression, I'm feeling the same way. One of my dogs is dying... ya know.

Is this going to be like DoFS, except in Donna's POV?

Aw poor Donna. And poor Alexandra as well.
Your writing just gets better and better, if that's even possible! Really great work...and I can't wait to read the next chapter, but also kind of dread it, because I know what's coming :(
Ah, well, I eagerly await your update. Keep up the spectacular writing!
-scarletfireblaze

Nice...I wonder what made Alexandra's father see sense all of a sudden...
Hmm, anyhow, I'm glad Brooke was able to slap some sense into him (sometimes I wished she had actually SLAPPED him) XD
Thanks for updating, and keep up the awesome writing! _
-scarletfireblaze

I say you're a good artist.

:O intense chapter! Emotional there at the end.. :'(

Coolio. I'm glad you will be updating regularly now, because I really lvoe all your stories.
scarletfireblaze

This is a great story, are you going to continue with this or is that it? (I would like to see the scene where she meets Brooke but that's OK)

Love the story, Firestorm! Also, I read your comment for Rupee's story Death Reborn. Oddly enough, Rupee is my sibling. :D Anyways I completely agree with you.

yeah, an update! Glad you 're updating so fast! ;)

I hope Donna really feels the same about Pyromancy on the inside as she does on the outside. Aww, Donna, you're always so optimistic! :)

Keep up the good writing, and the ending was okay...I can't really think of any other way to close it up.

scarletfireblaze

Greta, great, great chapter, and yes, it was different than Donna's Special Moments. :)

I'm so glad you updated, and I hope Donna's limp starts to lessen soon.

It's too bad, she-

Nevermind. I don't want to give anything away to people who haven't read DOFS.

Keep up the amazing writing!

Scarletfireblaze