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Son of Whitebeard 5/26/12 . chapter 40
It seems these mutated marines could be the work of Vegapunk.

And Caden's arrival could be the work of Moria.
Alpenwolf 5/25/12 . chapter 40
mutated marines? why the hell am I thinking now about the hunger games?

what the hell? how did caden appear here now? o_O isn't he long dead or something?
Neeky-chan 5/24/12 . chapter 40
Oooh! Caden has appeared! Is it to help Gabriella? Or something else...? It's getting exciting and I cannot wait until the next one! :D Hope you have a great day!

Neeky-chan
Neeky-chan 5/20/12 . chapter 39
Ha ha, Bedros has appeared once again. I wonder why he's come back. Something doesn't seem right at all... I am excited to know what happens next. :3

Neeky-chan
AliceLaw 5/20/12 . chapter 39
Oh, Bedros! It's been a while u.u

You really made Kidd very touchy, didn't ya? But I like him like that. It wouldn't be funny without his mood swings x)
Anon 5/20/12 . chapter 39
well, since i only do reviews for Bones, I thought it proper to say that I also read this and to please update soon :)
mukii 5/20/12 . chapter 39
Bedros charm me in the background is good, but I miss his jokes, I remain curious to know who is in April, and Kid's family if I would have brothers or sisters would also like pirates, aber'm not commented in so long but of truth that I read on this fic and I love it.
Son of Whitebeard 5/20/12 . chapter 39
Looks like a mutinity
Alpenwolf 5/20/12 . chapter 39
I completely forgot of Jafar, I have to admit that fact ... bad me

woot? a baby? o.O ... I have the feeling that won't end good

Killer? In Panic? What's now? A yonko? admiral? or something worse? P ... anyway Killer in panic? ... WTF? is the earth gonna turn pink now?
Alpenwolf 5/13/12 . chapter 38
oops another one falling from the sky? though this time it is gabriella and right into kidd's lap?

Ooh Gabriella treating kidd ...sounds so nice even if it hurts

oho foreshadowing ... so kidd is close to getting the metall hand huh?

Killer actually agreed with the logic, though he was slightly surprised that Hawkins had the word fun in his vocabulary. ... I don't know why but I made a short laughing sound while reading that sentence

hebe I guess or madeleine ... na P
Son of Whitebeard 5/13/12 . chapter 38
It is nice that you have Hawkins encounter Kidd. They always seem to have met before.

It is interesting, how you have Kidd also matched up to this Cyborg very interesting.
Animelover007 5/10/12 . chapter 37
You're evil! leaving us hang like that, wondering what his power is that would actually surprise Kidd! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Alpenwolf 5/10/12 . chapter 37
Mayday, Mayday! lol

killer and hawkins fighting on the same side? oh that's gonna be hilarious! WHERE IS MY POPCORN?

gabriella has a problem now ... as does kidd probably ...
Son of Whitebeard 5/10/12 . chapter 37
Token is not a Token character anymore just look at his Devil Fruit ability.
UnperfectButLovingIt 5/10/12 . chapter 37
I do not like Token one bit. He should leave Kidd and Gabriella alone immediately !

GREAT chapter :) UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE !
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